Fearless Jill
Once there was a girl, named Fearless Jill. She was Fearless Phill’s sister. She was as invincible as her brother, she loved to go hiking like her brother. She was an impatient person and didn’t like to play indoors.
Fearless Jill was not afraid of many animals that wanted to scare her. She was not afraid of lions, bears, dogs, rabbit and bees. She was very well trained in karate and taekwondo. She was very sure she could look after herself well.
However, there was an animal she was afraid of. She was afraid of snakes! One fine day, as she was finding twigs, a snake approached her. She screamed loudly and bolted down the mountain track. She never boosted about being invincible.
Sunday, January 30, 2011
Faiez's Group Writing
Fearless Jill
Once, there was a girl named Fearless Jill. She was Fearless Phil’s sister. She was as brave as him. She loved hiking like her brother. She was very impatient. She preferred outdoor activities than studying at home.
Fearless Jill was not afraid of any fierce animals. She was not afraid of lions, tigers, cheetahs, bees, bears, elephants and dogs. She was very well trained in karate. She could even use a sword and a sniper. She was sure she could protect herself.
However, there was an animal she was scared of. She was scared of lizards! One fine day, while she was playing basketball, a tiny little lizard went to her backyard. When the lizard approached her, she screamed and she bolted down from her house to her grandma’s house. Fearless Jill was not invincible! And never boast that she was invincible.
From-
Dolphin Group:
1. Celest
2. Zheng Long
3. Faiez
4. Jing Xuan
Once, there was a girl named Fearless Jill. She was Fearless Phil’s sister. She was as brave as him. She loved hiking like her brother. She was very impatient. She preferred outdoor activities than studying at home.
Fearless Jill was not afraid of any fierce animals. She was not afraid of lions, tigers, cheetahs, bees, bears, elephants and dogs. She was very well trained in karate. She could even use a sword and a sniper. She was sure she could protect herself.
However, there was an animal she was scared of. She was scared of lizards! One fine day, while she was playing basketball, a tiny little lizard went to her backyard. When the lizard approached her, she screamed and she bolted down from her house to her grandma’s house. Fearless Jill was not invincible! And never boast that she was invincible.
From-
Dolphin Group:
1. Celest
2. Zheng Long
3. Faiez
4. Jing Xuan
Stephanie's Group Writing
Fearless Jill
Once there was a girl, her name was Fearless Jill. She was Fearless Phil younger sister. She was as brave as her brother. She liked to go hiking in the mountain. She usually boasted that. She was invincible and was impatient person too. She knew how to handle a gun. She played in many gun competitions. She was not afraid of many animals. She was not afraid of lions, tigers, bears, dogs, rabbits and bees. She was very sure she could look after herself. But she was afraid of snakes. One fine day, while she was resting under a tree, a snake approached her. She was trembling in fright. She bolted away from the tree, she ran all the way to the next town. She never boasted that she was invincible and never called herself Fearless Jill again.
The End
By: Jethro, Jemima and Stephanie Lee
Once there was a girl, her name was Fearless Jill. She was Fearless Phil younger sister. She was as brave as her brother. She liked to go hiking in the mountain. She usually boasted that. She was invincible and was impatient person too. She knew how to handle a gun. She played in many gun competitions. She was not afraid of many animals. She was not afraid of lions, tigers, bears, dogs, rabbits and bees. She was very sure she could look after herself. But she was afraid of snakes. One fine day, while she was resting under a tree, a snake approached her. She was trembling in fright. She bolted away from the tree, she ran all the way to the next town. She never boasted that she was invincible and never called herself Fearless Jill again.
The End
By: Jethro, Jemima and Stephanie Lee
Sheryl's Group Writing
Once there was a girl named, Fearless Jill. She was Fearless Phil's sister. She was as brave as a lion. She liked to go hiking on mountains. She enjoyed outdoors actives and disliked going indoors.
Fearless Jill was not afraid of all the animals execpt crocodiles. She was good at karate, and could use a machine gun well. Since she could do karate well, she was very sure that she could look after herself.
One bright and sunny day, she was cooking near the river, out of the blue a crocodile came out of the river. She screamed loudly, and bolted down the mountain track. And she never boasted.
Fearless Jill was not afraid of all the animals execpt crocodiles. She was good at karate, and could use a machine gun well. Since she could do karate well, she was very sure that she could look after herself.
One bright and sunny day, she was cooking near the river, out of the blue a crocodile came out of the river. She screamed loudly, and bolted down the mountain track. And she never boasted.
Ryan's Group Writing
Fearless Jill by Ryan,Yong shin,Sherlyn,Le Yi
Once there was a girl, her name was FearlessJill. She was Fearless Phil's sister. Fearless Jill was as brave as her brother. She did not like indoor games. She love to climb mountains and hiking with brother
Fearless Jill was not afraid of many animals. She was not afraid of lions, bears, dogs and snakes. She was not afraid of these animals because she was invincible.
However, there was an animal she was afraid of, she was afraid of bees because the bees can sting her. One fine day, a bunch of bees flew into her house. When she saw the bunch of bees, she screamed and ran to her brother's house.From now on, she never said that she was invincible.
Once there was a girl, her name was FearlessJill. She was Fearless Phil's sister. Fearless Jill was as brave as her brother. She did not like indoor games. She love to climb mountains and hiking with brother
Fearless Jill was not afraid of many animals. She was not afraid of lions, bears, dogs and snakes. She was not afraid of these animals because she was invincible.
However, there was an animal she was afraid of, she was afraid of bees because the bees can sting her. One fine day, a bunch of bees flew into her house. When she saw the bunch of bees, she screamed and ran to her brother's house.From now on, she never said that she was invincible.
Cheng Han's Group Writing
A-Star Group: Cheng Han ,Justin Tan and Tze En
Fearless Jill
Deep in the woods, there lived a girl named Fearless Jill. She was Fearless Fhil's sister. She was stronger and braver than her brother but she was extremely impatient.
She was not afraid of many animals just like her brother.She loved climbing mountains. In the mountains she met many ferocious animals like lions, tigers, bears, hyneas and crocodiles but she was not afraid of them at all! But one bright and cheerful day while Fearless Jill was hiking in the mountains, a snake slithered towards her.
Fearless Jill thought herself as invincible so she flexed her muscles. But when the snake showed its fangs, as quick as light she bolted down the mountain track.
She never boasted of being invincible again and never went hiking ever again.
Fearless Jill
Deep in the woods, there lived a girl named Fearless Jill. She was Fearless Fhil's sister. She was stronger and braver than her brother but she was extremely impatient.
She was not afraid of many animals just like her brother.She loved climbing mountains. In the mountains she met many ferocious animals like lions, tigers, bears, hyneas and crocodiles but she was not afraid of them at all! But one bright and cheerful day while Fearless Jill was hiking in the mountains, a snake slithered towards her.
Fearless Jill thought herself as invincible so she flexed her muscles. But when the snake showed its fangs, as quick as light she bolted down the mountain track.
She never boasted of being invincible again and never went hiking ever again.
Suhana's Group Writing
Arnold, Jennifer, Suhana and Kwok Ian.
{Transformers}
Fearless Jill.
Fearless Jill was a girl who liked adventures. She was as brave as Fearless Phil. Fearless Jill was very impatient. She didn’t like staying at home and play
with dolls. She enjoyed outdoor activity.
Fearless Jill was not afraid of many animals. She was not afraid of bats, pandas, whales, sharks and wild boar. She was trained in judo and could use a sword very well.
However, there was an animal she was afraid of. She was afraid of lizards! One fine day, as she was hiking in the woods, a lizard climbed up to her shoulder. She screamed so loudly until all the rocks and trees went crack. After that, she went bolted out of the woods. From that day onwards, she never boasted about being invincible again.
{Transformers}
Fearless Jill.
Fearless Jill was a girl who liked adventures. She was as brave as Fearless Phil. Fearless Jill was very impatient. She didn’t like staying at home and play
with dolls. She enjoyed outdoor activity.
Fearless Jill was not afraid of many animals. She was not afraid of bats, pandas, whales, sharks and wild boar. She was trained in judo and could use a sword very well.
However, there was an animal she was afraid of. She was afraid of lizards! One fine day, as she was hiking in the woods, a lizard climbed up to her shoulder. She screamed so loudly until all the rocks and trees went crack. After that, she went bolted out of the woods. From that day onwards, she never boasted about being invincible again.
Friday, January 28, 2011
The BEAN...
MLEA 2 - Group Writing
Wednesday, January 26, 2011
MLEA 1 Class Writing
Hey...children...here is what we did together as a class. Do refer to your MLEA 1 (Class Writing) and MLEA 2 (Group Writing) while doing your MLEA 3 (Individual Writing). Let's look at MLEA 1 now...
Fearless Jill
Once there was a girl, her name was Fearless Jill. She was Fearless Phil’s sister. She was as brave as her brother. She liked to climb mountains and go on many adventures. She was a very impatient person. She didn’t like staying at home and play with toys. She enjoyed outdoor activities.
Fearless Jill was not afraid of many animals. She was not afraid of lions, tigers, bears, dogs, rabbits and bees. She was very well trained in Kung Fu and could use a gun very well. She was very sure she could look after herself well.
However, there was an animal she was afraid of. She was afraid of snakes! One fine day, as she was cooking, a snake approached her. She screamed loudly and bolted down from her house to her neighbour’s house. After which, she never boasted that she was invincible.
Fearless Jill
Once there was a girl, her name was Fearless Jill. She was Fearless Phil’s sister. She was as brave as her brother. She liked to climb mountains and go on many adventures. She was a very impatient person. She didn’t like staying at home and play with toys. She enjoyed outdoor activities.
Fearless Jill was not afraid of many animals. She was not afraid of lions, tigers, bears, dogs, rabbits and bees. She was very well trained in Kung Fu and could use a gun very well. She was very sure she could look after herself well.
However, there was an animal she was afraid of. She was afraid of snakes! One fine day, as she was cooking, a snake approached her. She screamed loudly and bolted down from her house to her neighbour’s house. After which, she never boasted that she was invincible.
Tuesday, January 25, 2011
Our MLEA Experience
Monday, January 24, 2011
The Rise Above for our CSCL
Language Ideas!
Hey...kids, I would like you to try the follwing link. It has great language practices in it. Have fun!
Language Ideas
Cheers,
Mdm Pavithra.
Language Ideas
Cheers,
Mdm Pavithra.
Similes Challenge!
Hi!Children...have fun trying the following game. Hope you learn new words!
http://www.gameschool.co.nz/task/game/gid/5/did/101/title/Similes.htm
Regards,
Mdm Pavithra.
http://www.gameschool.co.nz/task/game/gid/5/did/101/title/Similes.htm
Regards,
Mdm Pavithra.
Friday, January 14, 2011
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