Wednesday, January 26, 2011

MLEA 1 Class Writing

Hey...children...here is what we did together as a class. Do refer to your MLEA 1 (Class Writing) and MLEA 2 (Group Writing) while doing your MLEA 3 (Individual Writing). Let's look at MLEA 1 now...

Fearless Jill


Once there was a girl, her name was Fearless Jill. She was Fearless Phil’s sister. She was as brave as her brother. She liked to climb mountains and go on many adventures. She was a very impatient person. She didn’t like staying at home and play with toys. She enjoyed outdoor activities.

Fearless Jill was not afraid of many animals. She was not afraid of lions, tigers, bears, dogs, rabbits and bees. She was very well trained in Kung Fu and could use a gun very well. She was very sure she could look after herself well.

However, there was an animal she was afraid of. She was afraid of snakes! One fine day, as she was cooking, a snake approached her. She screamed loudly and bolted down from her house to her neighbour’s house. After which, she never boasted that she was invincible.
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16 comments:

  1. UnknownJanuary 27, 2011 at 2:56 AM

    Dear Mdm Pavithra,the class writing was very interesting and funny!

    Thank you.

    Arnold Lau.

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  2. UnknownJanuary 27, 2011 at 3:08 AM

    Dear Pavithra,the writing was very creative and funny!
    minic

    Thank You.

    Dominic Lau

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  3. AnonymousJanuary 27, 2011 at 4:59 AM

    Dear Mdm Pavithra,
    The writing is very fun. I enjoyed it very much.





    Thank you very much, Mdm pavithra.

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  4. chloe hongJanuary 27, 2011 at 5:17 AM

    Dear Mdm Pavithra, I love the class writing. Thank you!

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  5. @TingalingJanuary 27, 2011 at 10:04 PM

    dear Mdm Pavi,


    I enjoyed having the class writing


    Thank you!Yap Ting Ru

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  6. AliciaJanuary 27, 2011 at 11:04 PM

    Dear Mdm.Pharvithra,the class writting was fun . When are we going to do another ?

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  7. TamagesJanuary 27, 2011 at 11:18 PM

    Hello Mdm Pavithra,

    Seem like the students enjoying the class very much...keep up the good work.
    Thanks

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  8. Putera MFJanuary 28, 2011 at 12:46 AM

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  9. Putera MFJanuary 28, 2011 at 12:54 AM

    Dear Mdm Pavithra,


    the class writing was very fun and exiting. I wish we can do it again.

    Thanks

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  10. CelestJanuary 28, 2011 at 7:28 PM

    Mdm Pavithra, when I came to the part when Fearless Jill was scared of snakes, I thought it was very funny. Thank you for adding humor to the story.

    Celest

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  11. AnonymousJanuary 29, 2011 at 1:14 AM

    Dear Mdm Pavithra,
    I really enjoy the class writting.I feel like thanking you a hundred times.

    Thank you!

    Qin Xu

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  12. AnonymousJanuary 29, 2011 at 2:36 AM

    Dear Mdm Pavithra,
    Thank You for making this activity fun, I really enjoy doing this activity.

    Thank You!
    Tze En

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  13. AnonymousJanuary 29, 2011 at 4:04 AM

    Dear Mdm Pavithra,
    I enjoyed the class writing and I like this
    activity very much.

    Regards
    Sue Zheng Long

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  14. Jesslynn KhongJanuary 29, 2011 at 5:54 AM

    Dear Mdm Pavithra,

    when I started reading your compo,I felt it so interesting that I want to know what happened next.I would want to thank you for typing such a
    interesting story!

    Jesslynn Khong Yu Xin

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  15. Fun And Exciting PlaceJanuary 29, 2011 at 8:53 PM

    Dear Madm Pavithra,

    The class writing is hilarious!!I really enjoy the class writing:) You are very kind.

    Thank you,
    Allyn

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  16. Jemima PhuaJanuary 30, 2011 at 1:36 AM

    Dear Mdm Pavithra,

    I think that the class writing is very funny.Especially when Fearless Jill screamed and
    bolted down from her house to her neighbour's
    house.It was really funny.

    thank you,
    Jemima Phua

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