Fearless Jill
Once there was a girl, her name was Fearless Jill. She was Fearless Phil younger sister. She was as brave as her brother. She liked to go hiking in the mountain. She usually boasted that. She was invincible and was impatient person too. She knew how to handle a gun. She played in many gun competitions. She was not afraid of many animals. She was not afraid of lions, tigers, bears, dogs, rabbits and bees. She was very sure she could look after herself. But she was afraid of snakes. One fine day, while she was resting under a tree, a snake approached her. She was trembling in fright. She bolted away from the tree, she ran all the way to the next town. She never boasted that she was invincible and never called herself Fearless Jill again.
The End
By: Jethro, Jemima and Stephanie Lee
Wow! She has the energy to run all the way to the next town!
ReplyDeleteDear Stephanie and friends,hmm..... the writing is quite good.Well done!
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ReplyDeleteI agree with Cheng Han. I've never heard of anyone with that much energy!
ReplyDeleteBravo!I like your story!
ReplyDeleteDear Stephanie's group,
ReplyDeleteYour story is interesting!Keep it up!
Thank you,
Allyn
Hi Stephanie's group
ReplyDeleteI like the story especially she ran all the way to the next town.
Thank You!
Tze En
Hi Stephanie's group, your storey is amazing and interesting.Keep up the good work !
ReplyDeleteThanks for spending time reading our group story and comment about it.
ReplyDeleteYour story is very interesting
ReplyDeleteDear Stephanie and friends, your story was writen very well and marvellous!
ReplyDeleteGreat job!
From: Jesslynn Khong Yu Xin
DEAR STEPHANIE AND FRIENDS,
ReplyDeleteGOOD job,it is very funny.