Sunday, January 30, 2011

Faiez's Group Writing

Fearless Jill
Once, there was a girl named Fearless Jill. She was Fearless Phil’s sister. She was as brave as him. She loved hiking like her brother. She was very impatient. She preferred outdoor activities than studying at home.
Fearless Jill was not afraid of any fierce animals. She was not afraid of lions, tigers, cheetahs, bees, bears, elephants and dogs. She was very well trained in karate. She could even use a sword and a sniper. She was sure she could protect herself.
However, there was an animal she was scared of. She was scared of lizards! One fine day, while she was playing basketball, a tiny little lizard went to her backyard. When the lizard approached her, she screamed and she bolted down from her house to her grandma’s house. Fearless Jill was not invincible! And never boast that she was invincible.

From-

Dolphin Group:
1. Celest
2. Zheng Long
3. Faiez
4. Jing Xuan

12 comments:

  1. Hi Faiez,
    I too prefer outdoor activicties than studying too.

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  2. Dear Faiez's group,your story is very interesting!Keep up with your good work!

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  3. Hi Qin Xu thank you for your comment!

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  4. Dear Cheng Han,
    Thank you for your comment
    I appreciate it.
    Thank you,
    Faiez

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  5. Dear Faies's Group,

    Well done and keep it up!

    Thank you,
    Allyn

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  6. Hi Faiez,your story about Fearless Jill is very interesting!Keep it up!


    Jethro

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  7. Hi Faiez's group
    What is the meaning of sniper?

    Thank You!
    Tze En

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  8. Dear Tze En , sniper is a kind of gun.Thank you for asking .

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  9. Hi Faiez,
    your group writing was very interesting.Well Done!

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  10. Dear Faiez and friends, this story your wrote was marvellous and funny. Great job!

    Thank you!

    From: Jesslynn Khong Yu Xin

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  11. Dear FAIez,

    THIS is the best story!!!I like it.

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