Sunday, January 30, 2011

Stephanie's Group Writing

Fearless Jill

Once there was a girl, her name was Fearless Jill. She was Fearless Phil younger sister. She was as brave as her brother. She liked to go hiking in the mountain. She usually boasted that. She was invincible and was impatient person too. She knew how to handle a gun. She played in many gun competitions. She was not afraid of many animals. She was not afraid of lions, tigers, bears, dogs, rabbits and bees. She was very sure she could look after herself. But she was afraid of snakes. One fine day, while she was resting under a tree, a snake approached her. She was trembling in fright. She bolted away from the tree, she ran all the way to the next town. She never boasted that she was invincible and never called herself Fearless Jill again.
The End

By: Jethro, Jemima and Stephanie Lee

12 comments:

  1. Wow! She has the energy to run all the way to the next town!

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  2. Dear Stephanie and friends,hmm..... the writing is quite good.Well done!

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  4. I agree with Cheng Han. I've never heard of anyone with that much energy!

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  5. Dear Stephanie's group,

    Your story is interesting!Keep it up!

    Thank you,
    Allyn

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  6. Hi Stephanie's group
    I like the story especially she ran all the way to the next town.

    Thank You!
    Tze En

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  7. Hi Stephanie's group, your storey is amazing and interesting.Keep up the good work !

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  8. Thanks for spending time reading our group story and comment about it.

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  9. Your story is very interesting

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  10. Dear Stephanie and friends, your story was writen very well and marvellous!

    Great job!

    From: Jesslynn Khong Yu Xin

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  11. DEAR STEPHANIE AND FRIENDS,


    GOOD job,it is very funny.

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