Sunday, January 30, 2011

Shayn's Group Writing

Fearless Jill


Once there was a girl, named Fearless Jill. She was Fearless Phill’s sister. She was as invincible as her brother, she loved to go hiking like her brother. She was an impatient person and didn’t like to play indoors.

Fearless Jill was not afraid of many animals that wanted to scare her. She was not afraid of lions, bears, dogs, rabbit and bees. She was very well trained in karate and taekwondo. She was very sure she could look after herself well.

However, there was an animal she was afraid of. She was afraid of snakes! One fine day, as she was finding twigs, a snake approached her. She screamed loudly and bolted down the mountain track. She never boosted about being invincible.
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12 comments:

  1. Cheng HanJanuary 30, 2011 at 4:51 AM

    Hi Shayn,
    I like the way your group write.

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  2. AnonymousFebruary 1, 2011 at 1:03 AM

    Hi Shayn's group,you did a good job!Well Done!

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  3. CelestFebruary 1, 2011 at 4:37 AM

    Hi Shayn's group, great job! I like the way you think how to write.

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  4. @TingalingFebruary 1, 2011 at 5:32 AM

    GREAT JOB,Shayn's group!I like the way you write.

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  5. Fun And Exciting PlaceFebruary 2, 2011 at 1:15 AM

    Dear Cheng Han,Qin Xu,Celest and Ting Ru,

    Thank you all of you.

    Thank you
    Allyn

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  6. AnonymousFebruary 3, 2011 at 6:30 PM

    Hi Shayn's group,

    I like your group writing.Well Done!

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  7. AnonymousFebruary 5, 2011 at 1:39 AM

    Hi Shayn's group
    What is the meaning of karate?

    Thank You!
    Tze En

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  8. AliciaFebruary 5, 2011 at 6:50 PM

    Hi Shayn's group. Your group writting is very interesting . Well Done !

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  9. Sheryl NgFebruary 6, 2011 at 12:43 AM

    Hi Tze En Karate is like Kung Fu.


    Regards,
    Sheryl Ng

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  10. suhanaFebruary 8, 2011 at 2:02 AM

    Dear Shayn's group,

    I think your group writting is so interesting and very good! Well done!!

    Regards,
    Suhana Suhairi.

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  11. Jesslynn KhongMarch 18, 2011 at 5:24 AM

    Dear Shayn and friends, this story your wrote was funny and marvellous!Great job!

    Congratulation!

    From: Jesslynn Khong Yu Xin

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  12. UnknownApril 16, 2011 at 7:30 AM

    DEAR SHAYN and friends,

    I LIKE your story very much!!!GReaT JOb!

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